Hi, my name is Injoon we were told to do this three word challenge thing so here goes....
1. Work
-I decided that this year I work hard to get straight A's.
2.Create
-This year I decided to work hard to generate more creative ideas.
3.Practice
-I decided to practice more of everything this year.
Hi Injoon, I like your choices but I am thinking you could probably expand on them a little more. For example what made you decide that these 3 words should be your focus? In what ways do you want to increase your creativity? Is this artistically? In problem solving? Other ways? One more suggestion - remember the audience does not know who you are or what this "three word challenge thing" is - perhaps hyperlink the phrase to the original article so that your readers will understand what you are talking about. This is a way to engage your audience rather than have them wonder what you might be talking about. I will check back again to see your additions.
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