Friday, October 17, 2014
VOLLEYBALL
Come join the grade 8 boy's volleyball team! Come on in and bring a friend! It's fun, it's recreational and its a great way to meet new people! Are you good at volleyball and you don't know where else you might put those red wrists to work? Come on in! We except a variety of players; whether you're short, tall, thin, or muscular, you always (not really) have a chance at the team. The coach is nice and friendly (as long as you don't play with Starbuck's cups when you should be playing volleyball) and your teammates (should be) friendly too! The volleyball team is full of learning experiences and opportunities, you won't regret it! In fact, you'll have so much fun that you won't even realize that your wrists are red (until after)! You even get a jersey once you make it to the team! Meet other people from other schools just over a fun (competitive) game of volleyball. So come in here and spike a ball! Enjoy the liberty of slapping a ball at your friends while they stumble and fall to receive it! Set up plays with your best buds and watch them move you one step further to making the team! If you don't make the team, at least you know that you failed trying! There's always next year! Ever walk across the trophy case and find a picture of the grade 8 boy's volleyball team and wondered, "I want to join the volleyball team.."? Well this is your chance now! Now come on in and volley some balls! Tryouts after school in the gym.
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"as long as you don't play with Starbuck's cups when you should be playing volleyball"
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Delete@jaspermai Yup tote. I like this post because it really seems as if a reporter did it.
ReplyDeletei like this post because it makes me want to join volleyball if i still could join but i would like it if you could make paragraphs and indent so it does not look like a big wall of words. This is still a good post because you had details and you made it sound very exciting.
ReplyDeleteHi Injoon!
ReplyDeleteThe volleyball team sounds very interesting, I especially liked how you presented the information to your audience and made it sound really fun! I also liked how you put examples and points on the positives of joining the volleyball teamon. Although I think you could use fewer brackets in your report, other wise it's very exciting and I think you did a very good job. Based on your report, I think you chose number one, writing as a reporter.
Hey, its Eric
ReplyDeleteI was planning to join volleyball but didn't, and reading your report on volleyball makes me regret the decision of not joining volleyball. It seems like a sport where I would have a lot of fun, and meet new people. I like how you made so many advantages of joining the volleyball, and hardly any disadvantages. I think you could lower the amount of brackets and exclamation points to make it a bit better. Great report Injoon.
Hey Injoon, I don't like volleyball that much but, your attitude for example, "Keep trying, there's always another way, or next year!". That was amazing and very encouraging for people who play volleyball to always get back up it you fall and KEEP TRYING! Great Job Injoon!
ReplyDeleteThnx guys for all the constructive feedback... I really appreciate it!
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